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Persuasive Writing Coach

Build your argument. Check your craft. Revise with purpose.

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Enter the persuasive topic provided by your teacherCopy the wording carefully before choosing your position.
Your stand

Topic-independent planning prompts

Use these questions with any persuasive topic.

ReasonsWhat are your two strongest arguments? Why should the reader care?
EvidenceWhat examples, facts, observations or logical details could support each point?
AudienceWho are you convincing? What matters to them? What opposing view might they have?
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WRITERS TOOLBOX STRUCTURE

Multipurpose Introduction

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  1. Neutral sentenceSay something about the topic that most people accept.
  2. Context sentencesGive 2–3 useful facts or details about the topic.
  3. Argument sentenceState your position clearly.
  4. Sum upExplain briefly why your position is worthwhile.
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WRITERS TOOLBOX STRUCTURE

Lawyer Paragraph

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  1. State your pointSay exactly what this paragraph will prove.
  2. Say why it mattersExplain why the point is important.
  3. Smash ’em with evidenceGive 2–3 facts, examples or logical details.
  4. Sum upFinish with one strong sentence.
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WRITERS TOOLBOX STRUCTURE

Slam Dunk Paragraph

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  1. QuestionBegin with the question you will answer.
  2. Adverb startGo deeper: Interestingly, Surprisingly, Clearly…
  3. EvidenceGive facts, examples or specific details.
  4. ImpactExplain the effect or importance of the evidence.
  5. Slam dunkFinish with a very short, forceful sentence.
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WRITERS TOOLBOX STRUCTURE

Robust Conclusion

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  1. Make your standRestate your position without copying the introduction.
  2. Just the highlightsBriefly revisit your strongest arguments.
  3. Thoughtful insightExplain the most important lesson or why this issue matters.
  4. Big slam finishEnd boldly with the outcome you want.

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